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Whether it’s a short story, poem or video that you’d like to share, here is a forum where you can inquire, debate, philosophize and discuss it all.  Share your review/poem/ opinion etc. in the comments and other writers will comment their feedback.

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2 thoughts on “Share Your Own Work + Get Feedback

  1. The first time that they locked eyes was the beginning of their end. It was all fun and games, topsy turvy; like a roller coaster that never stopped going up. It felt like the sun was rising for them and it would never set, like the birds were singing for them and they would never stop.
    She was the tide and he was the shore; the universe knew that they would always come back to each other. When they kissed the whole world froze and they were passionately trapped in a beautiful garden of love. The flowers would bloom and the entire sky would radiate their happiness. She shared every inch of her soul with him and he did the same. They were on a never-ending path of light and excitement. Each day was more intimate than the next and the high was like nothing before.
    How long could this last?
    His mouth whispered tragic the night the birds stopped singing. Somehow the word beauty slipped off of his lips and he could not stop focusing on the outside. He didn’t realize that the definition of beautiful was her; that the outside wasn’t even a fraction of how lovely she was on the inside.
    The ride dropped, and so did they. They were fragile as glass from the start and just like that, shattered. As he picked up the pieces he couldn’t stop thinking of the bad, the downs, the tears. But every shard of that glass reminded him of why they loved eachother, why they love eachother. He looked down at his blood stained hands and realized his mistake, desperately hoping it wasn’t too late. Every part of her was completely and utterly extraordinary.
    They rebuilt their love on a stronger foundation and accepted that even though there would be permanent scars, the ups were better than the downs. Ane that anything hate can do, love can certainly do better.

    -Rollercoasters

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